PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A POST FROM EARLIER ON IN THE PROCESS. 

Monday 11th June

Me and my group was rehearsing with jackie and jackie was giving us advice and telling us what we did wrong . We had to cut out our first scene because it didn't really make sense.

How we improved 

The cafe scene we change it a little bit because it was long and we didn't know where scene was going and plus we kept on changing words , so we had to stick to our words and try not to change it.

And we also improve the bedroom scene - at first it didn't feel right but jackie and my group ideas , which made the scene look more interesting . 

Overall me and my group are doing well just need to put more energy especially me because I don't really put a lot of effect.