Monday 11th June
Me and my group was rehearsing with jackie and jackie was giving us advice and telling us what we did wrong . We had to cut out our first scene because it didn't really make sense.
How we improved
The cafe scene we change it a little bit because it was long and we didn't know where scene was going and plus we kept on changing words , so we had to stick to our words and try not to change it.
And we also improve the bedroom scene - at first it didn't feel right but jackie and my group ideas , which made the scene look more interesting .
Overall me and my group are doing well just need to put more energy especially me because I don't really put a lot of effect.