2 October
In today lesson we was improve some of the scene and performing then we have to give feed back on what should improve . 
Jackie told us that we have to be louder and be truthful in every moment and she also said the key with acting -  you have to pretend its happening which i agree because i think if you pretend to be something.
 i realised that when i say my monologue , i  talk  fast , what do i need is to relaxes and and take a deep breathe and take my time to talk and i also need to ask myself what does my character want and how should reacted.
i think i could of done better by speaking more clearly and talk loud and don't be affect to tell my story and show more emotions and also have more facial expression.